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Unshared secrets
Kept in some where

in some unknown vault
are very sad

Lack of light
They are dying in the dark

They wanted

To be born
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Our secrets are hidden in us and it always needs an other person to let them bloom and there are thousands hidden in us who need to breathe the fragrance of our neighbors too

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Louis Rams 24 May 2013

sooner or later the truth will come out - this is what life is about.

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Heather Wilkins 23 May 2013

this is an elegant write. Oh those secrets of life. Sometimes they must remain forever. Tucked away yes, never to be revealed so true. Tis is one reason poets love similies, and metaphors, and personification. We are at liberty to write as we please. I love this one. Excellent

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Stream like flow and cliff like high a lovely poem

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David Wood 21 May 2013

A lovely poem secrets must be kept secret, but love must prevail.

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Sallam Yassin 21 May 2013

great flow of true and destiny will help u and her and your secret will be like drops of rain wonderful beauty Abdul Wahab Thanks to share bro.

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Tribhawan Kaul 21 May 2013

Secrets are meant to be kept as it may make or mar destinies, yet the truth should prevail. A poem to ponder over. :)

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Neela Nath Das 20 May 2013

Very nice. Secrets won't be secret then.Secrecy has its different charm.

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Diane Hine 20 May 2013

This poem is guaranteed to give the reader pause for thought. I like the happy ending!

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Valsa George 20 May 2013

Regret over an unshared whim which hasn't withered, but hopefully awaits resurrection! ! Let a thousand buds bloom as flowers! ! Enjoyed! !

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