Seesaw Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Seesaw
In love! Though he is still a child,
in the back yard so pink so mild,
swinging on a branch of a lovely tree,
a bud of rose completely free.
Free of tensions free of pains,
Free of guilt free of stains,
He invites her to enjoy a seesaw,
she flew helplessly like a straw,
When up he is sad as she is down,
when down and sees a flying crown!
Crown or silky wings of a fairy?
She is so charming when she's merry!
He sticks his foot firmly on the ground,
he loves to enjoy her laughter's sound
Merely a friendship or a love at this age?
What next when youth comes out of the cage!
The entire poem is a great pleasure to read. It brings out the innocence of childhood and a bit of their psychology. But the best of that part of life is reflected in the following lines: Free of tensions free of pains, Free of guilt free of stains,
The pleasure of riding a seesaw is expressed so marvellously. the happiness of those children feels too close to catch as there is no gap left between the merriment of reading this poem and riding a seesaw... thank you.
favorite lines: ‘Free of tensions free of pains, Free of guilt free of stains, ” and “Merely a friendship or a love at this age? What next when youth comes out of the cage! ” For over 50 years I’ve been out of my ‘cage’, AND I’m stained! ! I’d rather be back in my cage, as long as I could stay there forever! ! :) bri p.s. I enjoyed your rhymes!
Too young to love but not too young to adore. All of us have gone through this stage, - a 10 Free of guilt free of stains
What is next when youth is out of its cage, is quite possibly a pulled muscle or injured back.: -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/29/2024 7:30:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Lovely poem like the lovely kids on the seesaw! The simple pleasures of innocent childhood captured beautifully! A 10