Selfless Poem by mikayla carpenter

Selfless



I, myself............................... gave
you everything

I helped you........................ up
when you were down

Loved you with................... my
whole heart

I let you have the................ life
you always wanted

The life you longed............. for
for years

I had given......................... you
everything I ever wanted

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Core 22 June 2009

very good keep on writing

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Anju Addanki 19 June 2009

HI That was a nice one. and of course a true one keep writing and i will keep commenting.

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Barbara Terry 18 June 2009

I agree we give them everythng we ever wanted LOL I like that last line it puts everything in perspective from a woman's point. A 10+++++ and thank you fior sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Christina Smith 18 June 2009

i think that was a sweet poem with a lot of love and respect in it thanks for sharing xxxxxxx Christina xxx musiclaughlove

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Carol Gall 18 June 2009

like the style i feel there could be more but what you wrote is very good

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