Take Me There Poem by mikayla carpenter

Take Me There

Rating: 5.0


Take me to that place,
where we can be alone.
With silence all around,
It's all we've ever known.

Take me to that place,
where no one's around to see.
The kisses that we share,
just only you and me.

Take me to that place,
where no one gives a care.
Because all I've ever wanted is for you,
to take me there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Wynn 29 June 2009

You have the skill to write poetry and this poem is very good.

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George F. Hunter 19 June 2009

I like this poem. Nice structure, rhythm and rhyming.

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Anju Addanki 19 June 2009

HI It was a short one but nice one. Thought i felt u caould have added a para or two more. Like after i read i feltoh a short one wish it was long.

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