Senryu 1 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 1

Rating: 5.0


(Senryu 1 revised - 5 7 4)

Story telling a
Trait of salesman and not of
a true leader.

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Senryu 1 (Original Free Form)

Story telling is a
Trait of salesman and politician
Not of a true leader.

Thursday, April 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: leadership,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I write my short thoughts often naming them as Random Thoughts. Some of them are revised to conform with the form of Senryu or Haiku. In the processes of learning first named as free form or traditional, and revised again as I learn more of the traditional or classical form. Just for the sake of archiving my own learning curve some time I post them together.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 12 April 2016

A true leader makes the history which is remembered ever. Short but deep and meaningful.

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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2016

Don't forget lawyers. You speak wisely

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Savita Tyagi 07 April 2016

Thank you Kelly and thanks for adding more spark!

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