Senryu - 145 Time Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 145 Time

Rating: 5.0


expensive wristwatch
rusted in the sea water
now time is standstill

Saturday, May 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2016

Yes! Everything depends on time. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2016

Yes! Everything depends in time. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2016

Time stops for us all, rich and poor alike. A 10

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 May 2016

Nothing is more precious than Time. A very well-composed haiku.

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Unwritten Soul 28 May 2016

If only time is also frozen like watch did....i will forever young, i would love to..because growing up is such challenging phase ever hahaha

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