Senryu - 151 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 151

Rating: 5.0


silhouettes of skin
swallows the salt of my eyes
leaving me in dark

Sunday, June 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 13 June 2016

Oh I c from where this darkness appears, interesting one Asim.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2016

Trying to imagine out many things! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2016

Remarkable wording. A 10

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