Senryu - 160 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 160

Rating: 5.0


a flooded river
flowing from the heart to eyes
a changing season

Friday, June 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 26 June 2016

Many ways to go with this- for me, my heart leaps to the years upon years when the river with all its ice floes smashed over the banks and swept through the pastures and the riding club and we had to ride our horses out and take them into the shelter belt around the city or into the city and turn them loose in back yards. Fences knocked down, barns swept away, hay stacks spoiled, tack ruined. But later when all had dried out the flood plain was beautiful in its greenery and new barns and new fencing. A changing season in so many ways. Excellent write that takes me down more than one memory lane and more than one season 10+++++++++++

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Nosheen Irfan 25 June 2016

This is superb. Life has many seasons and colors. And yes it's true that life submerges us often.10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 June 2016

With the acts of nature! Nice piece of work.

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Kelly Kurt 24 June 2016

The seasons of life can seem to change on a daily basis

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