Senryu - 176 Ants Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 176 Ants

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ants are carrying
a piece of strawberry cake
jack sings birthday song

Friday, July 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,birthday greetings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Jack 04 February 2021

Great observation. Fantastic imagery.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2016

A beautiful observation, life is decreasing and one is happy on coming closer to death.

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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2016

I sincerely appreciate the sharpness of your observation that turns an insignificant looking object into a literary marvel as is evident here in this poem. Thanks, Asim ji.

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2016

Thank u so much, I am humbled, your comments motivates me to explore further and farther....Thanks again Rajnishji.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 July 2016

We have to learn from the ants! Thanks for sharing.

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