Senryu 2 (Revised) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 2 (Revised)

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eternal heaven
hope's final destination
elusive mirage.

Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2016

An elusive mirage buy we have no alternate but to chase it.

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Savita Tyagi 08 June 2016

Thank you so much Akhtarji for your thoughtful comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 June 2016

Illusion draws back our attention day to day and we run behind matters. This is definitely so sad and mirage acquires us. But our deep breaths tell us that we have hope and our eternal destination is to reach up to eternal heaven. Interesting sharing.10

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Savita Tyagi 01 June 2016

Thank you for your comment. It is so positive.

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