Senryu - 21 (Life's Tree Growing) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 21 (Life's Tree Growing)

Rating: 5.0


On the trodden path
account lingered on dealings
life's tree is growing.

Monday, September 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 21 September 2015

life's tree is here in this vast sky, covering all, very fine..

2 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

Life is like an amazing tree and this continuously grows much faster. Observing life very deeply you have brilliantly penned this poem...10

0 0 Reply
Sriranji Aratisankar 21 July 2016

Nice piece of work. A good conception indeed.

0 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 25 July 2016

Thanks much Sriranji.....

0 0
T Rajan Evol 21 September 2015

We are accountable for our good or bad deeds, very well thought haiku.10

1 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 21 September 2015

Thank you Sir.

0 0
Jaishree Nair 21 September 2015

Our dealings would one day be accounted for.nice thought. Thank uou

3 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 21 September 2015

Thanks Much Maa'm for your encouragement.

0 0
Sanjukta Nag 21 September 2015

the tree of your poetry is also growing very large. another outstanding work on philosophy of life. thank you.10+++

2 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 21 September 2015

Thanks to you Maa'm.....

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success