Senryu - 215 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 215

Rating: 5.0


alone cuckoo sings
the song of melancholy
she peeps from window

Thursday, October 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: alone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 30 October 2016

There is a desolate mood in this poem, with a ray of hope in the last line, that leaves the reader in an expected wonder...an enjoyable read!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2016

Song of melancholy is wonderful always and nature can be well perceived with cuckoos's song. Having perception of nature is wise....10

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Nosheen Irfan 29 October 2016

Lovely imagery. I can hear the cuckoo sing.10

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