Senryu 24 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 24

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Ruled by poetry
I have become her captive.
Indentured labor!

Saturday, November 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: obsession
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

To create a poetry it needs lobour, obsession, sincerity, dedication and carefulness along with imagination. A person who is on creating poetry becomes captive. Dear madam, you have nicely inscribed this theme in your poem. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2017

Indentured labor is dedicated to a sublime cause..The sweet internal pleasure of a servant to God is sweeter than anything, sweetest of all. The obsession is only to achieve perfection that speaks of sincerity, dedication and carefulness. A great Senryu with a marvelous underlying philosophy..Appreciate your write from the bottom of my heart..10

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Savita Tyagi 18 November 2017

Thank you so much. Poetry certainly is a labor of love. Appreciate your comment and reading very much.

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