Senryu - 39 (Be Candid) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 39 (Be Candid)

Rating: ★5.0


Don't close your lips on
Beloved, sweetheart and friends
when heart approves them.

M. Asim Nehal
Saturday, October 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
poem poems Friends Lips
Download image of this poem.
Report this poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
By this Senryu I wish to tell you that always be frank, candid and open with three persons in life since your heart accepted them as beloved (Parents, children etc) sweetheart (True lover, wife etc)) and friends. If you don't tell them how much you love and care they may not understand your true inner feelings, moreover there will be huge communication gap between real act and actions and this will not strengthen bond between you and them, I personally feel lack of proper communication is the major cause of strained, broken or misunderstood relationships.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 14 October 2015

With opened doors of heart how can one close the lips.Two meanings and both are wonderfully written

1 0 Reply
Mihaela Pirjol 14 October 2015

So very true said....though it takes courage to declare one's love - a heart filled with love, finds it.

2 0 Reply
Seema Jayaraman 11 October 2015

a good reminder, we so tend to take our loved and near and dear ones for granted...

2 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 10 October 2015

I regularly tell the people in my life that I love and appreciate them. Wonderful haiku, Mohammed!

3 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2015

Be candid is found justified in your Haiku Be Candid. Wisely presented the truth. From your Poet's Note it is too vivid. Many thanks dear Asim, may God bless you and your family. ....10

2 0 Reply
See All Comments
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem
Poems By M. Asim Nehal
Ode To The Heart
Haiku - 8 Cosmic Union
A Wonderland
Test Of Love
Love Love - Life Life
See All Poems by M. Asim Nehal
Next Poem
1673 / 2158
Previous Poem
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
M. Asim Nehal
M. Asim Nehal
Nagpur
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Biography Comments Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

5/4/2024 5:29:11 AM # 1.0.0.1119

Close
Error Success