Senryu - 55 (Sacrifice) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 55 (Sacrifice)

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the mangled lamb must
be smashed by the shepherd lest
will infect others

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sacrifice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 24 October 2015

Good write Asim, at times some harsh decisions are mandatory for bigger reasons.

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Anita Sharma 20 October 2015

such a fantastic write.liked and loved

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Kelly Kurt 20 October 2015

A poetic way of pointing out the only down side of logic

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Ari Alsio 20 October 2015

Interestingly, the sheep would crush anything other than tending to the pathway. Special thanks hyphenation, many of haiku is here generous in terms of bytes.

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Loke Kok Yee 20 October 2015

Unfortunately such painful decisions need to be taken to protect the rest Thanks-10

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