Loke Kok yee

Senryu-A Stroke - Poem by Loke Kok yee

Tea spilling from glass
Wheelchair being pushed around
Doctor says a stroke

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu-A Stroke by Loke Kok yee

  • Bri Edwards (6/2/2016 9:56:00 PM)

    Damn fine picture.

    A stroke of luck is what i had.
    What the rooster had..... was sad.


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    (6/3/2016 4:33:00 AM)

    what about the strokes when you were bad?
    when you were young and a naughty lad

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  • (4/27/2016 8:52:00 PM)

    A great senryu giving a vivid snapshot of a stroke Loke and I was totally in awe of the chicken with the mobility apparatus. Someone really loves that chicken....10 (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (11/8/2015 7:13:00 AM)

    A sad display of words, so true for so many. But let me ask, where do you find these spectacular images. Fantatic...10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/24/2015 8:00:00 AM)

    Ha ha ha, I read it without looking at picture and enjoyed and when I saw picture my enjoyment went limitless....Superb. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    Very amazing poem shared here really. Interesting sharing. Tea is spilling from glass....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015

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