Senryu-A Stroke Poem by Loke Kok yee

Senryu-A Stroke

Rating: 5.0


Tea spilling from glass
Wheelchair being pushed around
Doctor says a stroke

Senryu-A Stroke
Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 June 2016

Damn fine picture. A stroke of luck is what i had. What the rooster had..... was sad. Bri :)

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Loke Kok Yee 03 June 2016

what about the strokes when you were bad? when you were young and a naughty lad

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Simone Inez Harriman 27 April 2016

A great senryu giving a vivid snapshot of a stroke Loke and I was totally in awe of the chicken with the mobility apparatus. Someone really loves that chicken....10

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Melvina Germain 08 November 2015

A sad display of words, so true for so many. But let me ask, where do you find these spectacular images. Fantatic...10

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2015

Ha ha ha, I read it without looking at picture and enjoyed and when I saw picture my enjoyment went limitless....Superb.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Very amazing poem shared here really. Interesting sharing. Tea is spilling from glass....10

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