Senryu- Forbidden Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Forbidden Love

Rating: 4.7


a open window
hit by many storms of life
a forbidden love

Senryu- Forbidden Love
Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fearful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta S 04 October 2020

Wow after storm the love is forbidden.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 October 2020

Window the heart is To seek peace roams like a monk Love is puzzling bird

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Sebastian G 04 October 2020

Excellent haiku. It has everything to describe the relationships

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Poetic Sky 04 October 2020

a open window now closed due to treachery many wounds Excellent one

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2020

Amazing forbidden love is wisely captured through window when storm hits its panes. An amazing poem is cleverly penned with amazing mind...5 stars..

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Michael Jack 04 October 2020

It will enter even with all your efforts to stop it.

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Deepak S S 04 October 2020

I meant fear not here

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Deepak S S 04 October 2020

A broken heart will always be here from love and this is what yourself Senyru tells about

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Unwritten Soul 04 October 2020

Tragedy fell into tears and tears vapour and become rain at the end, the whole land feel the pain

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Darren Jkoeryo 04 October 2020

Sad but true. DJ feels the same way.

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