curved thicket of eye
hide the tears of sorrow~ joy
moon behind the clouds
Beautiful senryu with striking imagery. Marvelous poetic expressions.
A wonderful senryu! Appreciated the curved thicket of eye part.......5 stars.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A meaningful and marvellous Senryu with vivid imagery, dear Poet Asim ji.....10