Senryu - Tears. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Tears.

Rating: 5.0


curved thicket of eye
hide the tears of sorrow~ joy
moon behind the clouds

Thursday, December 2, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 December 2021

A meaningful and marvellous Senryu with vivid imagery, dear Poet Asim ji.....10

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Anjandev Roy 03 December 2021

Meaningful piece.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 December 2021

Beautiful senryu with striking imagery. Marvelous poetic expressions.

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Poetic Sky 02 December 2021

Flood gates opened.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2021

A wonderful senryu! Appreciated the curved thicket of eye part.......5 stars.

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