Senryu - Wishes Hangs Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Wishes Hangs

Rating: 5.0


my wishes hangs far
twinkling above like the stars
keep my eyes ajar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

Twinkling above the star life swings and beauty motivates mind entirely. This poem is an excellent poem very nicely penned.10

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Hazel Durham 12 February 2019

Beautiful write and very well crafted!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 February 2019

Wow starry and astral dreams poem, wonderful indeed poet, clever! Kudos.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2019

A wonderful three liner my fiend! Thanks for sharing....10

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