Serious Thoughts Poem by Sandra Martyres

Serious Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


Run the marathon
It will help you regain form
To face life’s tough race

In a pensive mood
Looking for inspiration
Or just time to brood


Do not over-eat
Your neighbour could be starving
Share the extra meat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely all three of them...great going

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nice, the manner of telling too. shan

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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

A very serious thought indeed conveying a very strong message of realization of others and their importance sometimes even beyond yourself......The caring attitude this poem teaches us must be adopted in all goodwill and harmony......10/10

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

yes indeed...these verses arouses our mind's eye indeed....nice thought provoking piece that can touch many hearts 10+++ regards shan

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save the extra meal, ur neighbour may be hungry.... well conceived thoght

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Marilyn Lott 31 May 2009

Deep thoughts in this short little poem. Gives the reader reason to pause. Great! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 31 May 2009

very nice advice! ! !

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