Serving A Woman Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Serving A Woman

Rating: 5.0


Glorious night of desire,
A thousand dreams are spawned
Involving your dance-floor bracelets
And magical golden earrings
Creating love in the moonlight glare
Of the intoxicating city.

The avenues of street-car lights
Are as deeply in love with you
As every man who sees your dark hair
Caressing your goddess shoulders.

I will supplicate you for a millennium
And teach every awestruck boy
To obediently do the same.

Friday, March 23, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: car,city
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 25 March 2007

Intense, lyrical and very moving. World class write, Uriah. As always, Sandra

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U, beautifully heartfelt penning, romantic to the core... but remember, every goddess must treat her god similarly.... t x

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Alison Smith 23 March 2007

A man who knows his place... nice write.. Alison

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AND WELL YOU SERVED HER, SO IT WOULD SEEM.... Sterling write, my good friend....Good to see you quilling again. FJR

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Raynette Eitel 23 March 2007

Hope there is a woman you can send this to, Uriah. It is lovely. Raynette

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