I like, your taste...
I like, your style...
I like the thoughts
behind your smile.
I like the cognition,
beyond your eyes.
Beyond your looks
I like your reprise.
You know me to well,
I need not say a word.
With one fleeting glance
my intentions are heard.
With one gentle caress
my passions unfold.
Transfixed in your kiss,
your love spell, takes hold.
Elation, mind racing...
Euphoria,
Penetrating, breath taking
needing more... and more... of you.
Slipping deeper...
into your love.
Slipping deeper...
the surface above.
Succumbing, yielding,
giving in.
I am drowning, in you,
in sin...
''I am drowning, in you, ''-this is the key-line of this beautiful poem....you deserve another 10.
WOW! ! ! another breathless n speachless i have become! ! your poetry so much passion n zeal! i love them! ! ! great job! ! ! ~Bella
Succumbing, yielding, giving in. I am drowning, in you, in sin... falling deeper and deeper into love without an escape....... soul, body, infatuation, passion, desire. thank you very much. tony
You are like the prophet John, when he was caught up into the seventh heaven. Un-realness. Great poem.
Oh! Sounds like music! ! ! So sensual and smooth! ! ! ! What a physical love you describe here! ! ! !
It is wonderful in its simplicity. Reads like a ditty.But is getting plunged in love identical with getting sunk in sin? That shows that the throatful ease with which the poem took off got choked in the last line.Poor poet. He could not get rid of the mundane values even at empyrean heights.The poet is not capable of ecstasy.Call this poem a satire? The legitimation of the last line is that one must not be enamoured of the other. Call this poem didactic? Quite a good poem because of its opaqueness
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic aroma of surrendering soul. Nice love poem. Chased by passion and offering by soul. Thank you......Pranab k c 10