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Seventh Heaven

Rating: 4.7
I like, your taste...
I like, your style...
I like the thoughts
behind your smile.

I like the cognition,
beyond your eyes.
Beyond your looks
I like your reprise.
You know me to well,
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Mary-lisa Russo 28 September 2016
Lifted me onto a whirlwind going up and up! Marvelous!
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016
Succumbing, yielding, giving in. I am drowning, in you, in sin... falling deeper and deeper into love without an escape....... soul, body, infatuation, passion, desire. thank you very much. tony
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Howard Savage 06 January 2016
You are like the prophet John, when he was caught up into the seventh heaven. Un-realness. Great poem.
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Poetheart Morgan 23 November 2012
Oh! Sounds like music! ! ! So sensual and smooth! ! ! ! What a physical love you describe here! ! ! !
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Dr. Ramesh Mukhopadhyaya 05 October 2012
It is wonderful in its simplicity. Reads like a ditty.But is getting plunged in love identical with getting sunk in sin? That shows that the throatful ease with which the poem took off got choked in the last line.Poor poet. He could not get rid of the mundane values even at empyrean heights.The poet is not capable of ecstasy.Call this poem a satire? The legitimation of the last line is that one must not be enamoured of the other. Call this poem didactic? Quite a good poem because of its opaqueness
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Ken E Hall 23 September 2012
Seventh heaven of love well said loved it but no sin indeed...regards
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 September 2012
Marcus, I like your style and your rhymes...I like your poem!
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Elena Sandu 24 August 2012
Is there a big difference between possessing a woman's body or a woman's soul? … Or maybe both? … Is there more or less to a Seventh Heaven if there is one such? Your poem to me raised intriguing questions, thank you for share.
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Godfrey Morris 23 August 2012
Great expressions, nice flow to this piece
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Karen Sinclair 23 August 2012
sensual composure....this is just so hummanah i love it all but i do not understand the tie up line, it makes it slightly sad after so much fresh air.....
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