Marcus McKinley

Freshman - 844 Points (EARTH)

Seventh Heaven - Poem by Marcus McKinley

I like, your taste...
I like, your style...
I like the thoughts
behind your smile.

I like the cognition,
beyond your eyes.
Beyond your looks
I like your reprise.

You know me to well,
I need not say a word.
With one fleeting glance
my intentions are heard.

With one gentle caress
my passions unfold.
Transfixed in your kiss,
your love spell, takes hold.

Elation, mind racing...
Penetrating, breath taking
needing more... and more... of you.

Slipping deeper...
into your love.
Slipping deeper...
the surface above.

Succumbing, yielding,
giving in.
I am drowning, in you,
in sin...

Comments about Seventh Heaven by Marcus McKinley

  • Aqua Flower (10/31/2016 9:49:00 PM)

    Elation, Euphoria, Succumbing!
    Heavenly can never get enough of that. Beautifully written! (Report) Reply

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  • Mary-lisa Russo (9/28/2016 10:23:00 PM)

    Lifted me onto a whirlwind going up and up! Marvelous! (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/7/2016 12:59:00 PM)

    Succumbing, yielding,
    giving in.
    I am drowning, in you,
    in sin... falling deeper and deeper into love without an escape....... soul, body, infatuation, passion, desire. thank you very much. tony
    (Report) Reply

  • (1/6/2016 3:32:00 PM)

    You are like the prophet John, when he was caught up into the seventh heaven. Un-realness. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (11/23/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Oh! Sounds like music! ! ! So sensual and smooth! ! ! ! What a physical love you describe here! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2012 1:25:00 AM)

    It is wonderful in its simplicity. Reads like a ditty.But is getting plunged in love identical with getting sunk in sin? That shows that the throatful ease with which the poem took off got choked in the last line.Poor poet. He could not get rid of the mundane values even at empyrean heights.The poet is not capable of ecstasy.Call this poem a satire? The legitimation of the last line is that one must not be enamoured of the other. Call this poem didactic? Quite a good poem because of its opaqueness (Report) Reply

  • (9/23/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    Seventh heaven of love well said loved it but no sin indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • (9/8/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    Marcus, I like your style and your rhymes...I like your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (8/24/2012 1:15:00 AM)

    Is there a big difference between possessing a woman's body or a woman's soul? … Or maybe both? …
    Is there more or less to a Seventh Heaven if there is one such? Your poem to me raised intriguing questions, thank you for share.
    (Report) Reply

  • Godfrey Morris (8/23/2012 6:28:00 PM)

    Great expressions, nice flow to this piece (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2012 4:46:00 PM)

    sensual composure....this is just so hummanah i love it all but i do not understand the tie up line, it makes it slightly sad after so much fresh air..... (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/23/2012 4:40:00 PM)

    Very passionate write - some great lines. (Report) Reply

  • (8/18/2012 5:42:00 PM)

    WOW! ! ! another breathless n speachless i have become! ! your poetry so much passion n zeal! i love them! ! ! great job! ! !
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  • Kelly Seale (8/17/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    Ah, this is passion unfolding before mine eyes! Outstanding Write! The combination of your words describe such passion, love, lust, and ecstasy. I absolutely Love the last stanza! ! !
    ...Succumbing, yielding,
    giving in.
    I am drowning, in you,
    in sin...

    -Great Ink Marcus! ! !
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  • (8/17/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    ''I am drowning, in you, ''-this is the key-line of this beautiful deserve another 10. (Report) Reply

  • Dickson Mseti (8/15/2012 11:29:00 AM)

    Sensetional and clasic poem (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/14/2012 12:36:00 AM)

    Fantastic aroma of surrendering soul. Nice love poem. Chased by passion and offering by soul. Thank you......Pranab k c 10 (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (8/13/2012 2:29:00 PM)

    Very beautiful and sensual, knowing another soul like never before. Beautiful write Marcus! very beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Urshula Davis (8/12/2012 9:20:00 PM)

    I liked this! ! ! Very bold and a lot of details! (Report) Reply

  • Kaila George (8/12/2012 9:20:00 PM)

    That is a most provocative and sensual write....its brilliant in its flow of how much he wants and needs her such a beautiful write....very nice Marcus....will give you 10 on this one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 9, 2012

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