Sharing Is Caring! Poem by Luwi Habte

Sharing Is Caring!

Rating: 5.0


Earth shares the same for all
But time gets worst to the hell
Love became cheaper than money
It is not fair; sibling lets love and shares each & every body

We did nonsense we feel like we live ever and after
We forget the truth but our funeral will come later
Lets use our time lets love and care
It is for our best and for the glory of our creator

But people...
Some one is sympathy
Some one is lazy
Some one is king
Some one is maid
Some one is stupid and
Some one is kind

If I feel the best and I am enough wealthy
Even though I do have enough money
Thinking for further life would be better for me
Because at the rest under will be my homie

So lets love and care for each other
Further than love nothing is better

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chad Foster 17 May 2009

Im not really good at leaving comments. but i will say that i do love the message behind it. and i do enjoy the poem overall.

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Tou Yang 17 May 2009

this poem is soo true... i like how we can express our feelings through poems... great work

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Kamel kamel 17 May 2009

Love became sheaper than money this fit well nice words Luwi

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Carol Gall 17 May 2009

great poem! sharing and love make it all worthwhile

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Barbara Terry 17 May 2009

OMG! ! ! I so agree. Let us share our love not only from our hearts, but from deep inside of our souls as well. This is a marvelously wonderful poem that tells a beautiful message. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara

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Siddharth 26 May 2018

Nice poem lovely word

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Rebecca Harvey 12 September 2009

i think this poem is lovely luwi i really like the style

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

Love the life...love all alike...that could be the best policy ever in our short stay in this world...good inspirational poem, Luwi...meaningful...10

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Afzal Shauq 25 May 2009

hmmmmmmm what a new idea and richly done poem.... love it ++++++++++10

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 20 May 2009

Absolutely the true meaning of life is expressed here.

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