It takes a stranger
To know how I feel
To set me on my feet
And make me look unique
Uplifting my thoughts
And lending me his ears
He listens with intent
And doen't see I'm bent
He knows my wit within my wisdom
He wants to boost my kingdom
Giving all his best reguards
He stands and holds me to his guard
How fate has drawn us to each other
Through words of rhyme
We will relive the time
And make this moment last forever
I enjoyed this but you do have a habit of putting at least one line in which may jar or startle, 'Doesn't see I'm bent' is the one in this case! I know what you mean, but this is a stark way of putting it. Maybe its your style. Overall I enjoyed the idea and execution of this poem. Patrick
Poetry does have a way of creating bonds among total strangers. Keep sharing... great write! ! Brian
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Suzan, a good one, I am in full agreement! I tried to do a similar thing in my latest poem - The Prisoner! - Raj Nandy