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A Guide Into Heaven

Rating: 4.6
While I'm sitting pretty
Indulging in all luxury
Lavishing in style
My life has never been vile
Only beauty surrounds me
A picturesque view
Those birds do sing
While the angels wear there wings
An echo of laughter
That lasts for ever after
Sitting within an idyllic world
Tis the only world for me
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 November 2008
Beautiful poem....The last two lines are very meaningful and uplift the whole poem.
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Lily Law 26 September 2008
a well expressed poem... just lovely..
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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 September 2008
Lovely piece, whilst short- it truly speaks to the reader. Good Job :)
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Anthony Edmond John 09 September 2008
I love this lines Cheers... Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990
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Kesav Easwaran 09 August 2008
good envious world of you, Suzan! the two lines commencing' those birds' are richly poetic...10/10 come to my in box...
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Chitra - 19 July 2008
profound in theme, excellent
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Neil Marsden 26 January 2008
Love the complexity of both the spoken and unspoken content of your work! Good luck with the book and life onwards! Neil
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Barry Van Allen 26 January 2008
Suzan, That feels obviously religious and at the same time quite observant, faith means having faith sometimes against the grain, ... and sometimes with it. I see both here, and that is good. B.V.A.
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Wennie C 19 January 2008
guide to heaven....still far from me....very far.... Good write! !
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Lady Lyn Rosete - Buchan 14 January 2008
Nice write, reading this poem makes me think about good things...just good things: -)
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