suzan gumush

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A Guide Into Heaven - Poem by suzan gumush

While I'm sitting pretty
Indulging in all luxury
Lavishing in style
My life has never been vile
Only beauty surrounds me
A picturesque view
Those birds do sing
While the angels wear there wings
An echo of laughter
That lasts for ever after
Sitting within an idyllic world
Tis the only world for me


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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (11/26/2008 6:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem....The last two lines are very meaningful and uplift the whole poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Lily Law (9/26/2008 7:10:00 AM)

    a well expressed poem... just lovely.. (Report)Reply

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  • Amy (9/13/2008 5:15:00 PM)

    Lovely piece, whilst short- it truly speaks to the reader. Good Job :) (Report)Reply

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  • Anthony Edmond JohnAnthony Edmond John (9/9/2008 4:52:00 AM)

    I love this lines Cheers...
    Anthony Edmond John
    +2348020984990
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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (8/9/2008 4:19:00 AM)

    good envious world of you, Suzan! the two lines commencing' those birds' are richly poetic...10/10
    come to my in box...
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  • Chitra - (7/19/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    profound in theme, excellent (Report)Reply

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  • Neil Marsden (1/26/2008 8:29:00 AM)

    Love the complexity of both the spoken and unspoken content of your work!

    Good luck with the book and life onwards!

    Neil
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  • Barry Van Allen (1/26/2008 5:41:00 AM)

    Suzan,
    That feels obviously religious and at the same time quite observant,
    faith means having faith sometimes against the grain,
    ... and sometimes with it. I see both here, and that is good.

    B.V.A.
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  • Wennie C (1/19/2008 10:46:00 PM)

    guide to heaven....still far from me....very far....
    Good write! !
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  • Lady Lyn Rosete - Buchan (1/14/2008 4:25:00 AM)

    Nice write, reading this poem makes me think about good things...just good things: -) (Report)Reply

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  • Cody Moore (1/10/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    Very nice. You should make a guide book out of this to heaven. (Report)Reply

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  • David Kowalczyk (1/7/2008 10:53:00 AM)

    Excellent job. Thanks, Suzan. (Report)Reply

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  • Mylove Poet (1/7/2008 10:01:00 AM)

    Hi Suzan, thanks for your lovely poem, I have enjoyed it.
    Mylovepoet.
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  • Ricky Owen (1/6/2008 4:51:00 PM)

    Brilliant enjoyed it alot
    great write
    nice one
    kindest Regards
    Ricky
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  • Beth L Adams (1/6/2008 3:20:00 PM)

    I love the 'Heavenly' picture you've painted, beautiful and serene! This is a place we all should hope to call our home in the afterlife. Excellent job! Beth (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvi Sylva (1/6/2008 2:47:00 PM)

    what a nice poem, wonderful world -topmark (Report)Reply

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  • Broken Peaces (1/6/2008 5:56:00 AM)

    Your life seems like a nice place to be (jealous) 10 regards Chris (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 6, 2008



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