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A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.7

Comes too late to conquer my ambitions
Comes too late to stage my play
All that I've written is lost and gone
My memory is at a distance
Is all that I've forgotten
Maybe I did commit too many sins
That's why My life is near a bin
A broken heart is all I've been given
How much more
Can one take!

Maybe this is the life
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Kesav Easwaran 14 September 2008

'My memory is at a distance Is all that I've forgotten'... good expressive write...the line quoted above is colorful poetic...10

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samar Halabi 10 September 2008

Great and really wonderful full of feelings good poem

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Rudy Hossam 07 September 2008

It really touched my heart and it hurts to now that you have suffered a lot in you life.......it really brought tears to my eyes...and an easy 10 for it

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 September 2008

In this poem 'My life is near a bin' touches much. My 10 with it.

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Nathaniel Booker 06 September 2008

A broken heart... never unwanted but often undaunted... One can only wish to ellude them... but we all know that there's never really a happily ever after to that kind of wish... Masterfully written Suzan, a **10** from beginning to end. Be Well

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Romeo Della Valle 15 May 2011

A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! I hope you have the time to read my poem also titled: A BROKEN HEART and enjoy it! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 March 2009

A broken heart is very near and dear to God. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Ozzy Govea 14 October 2008

You can see you're pain in this poem, well written!

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Bonnie Collins 12 October 2008

This is a filled with alot of sadness, however a broken heart sometimes is one of Gods worst emotional roller coaster rides, we most, indure... Remember life will go on and somehow, someway try to develope a positive in your soal, it is painfull, but things happen for a reason, sometimes the worst of reasons, and always we may never know the answer immediatly, but as life travels us through many roads, one day, it will hit you as to why this happened.... Remember too, no one can take your memories even if they are from a broken heart.... Sweet write and enjoyed this much.. Bonnie

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Dereje Amera 12 October 2008

very heart touching poem, which goes deep down to heart to those who have broken hearts. This must be from personal experience, i just guess. Best

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