She has the silence of turbulent ocean.
She has no boundaries that could dissect.
She has a slight tinge of innocence,
And that makes her perfectly imperfect.
I weave my moments,
with her sweet presence.
I feel her within;
I feel her without.
I delve into myself, and find that,
with her name, my every crevice cries.
She is buried in my heart,
And expressed in my eyes.
Filled in my breath
And soaked in my voice.
the intensity of your thought amazes me...sarvesh...
nice.. but it amazes me how most of the times we are so lost and confused that we can't find our own self within us whereas on the other hand there are some people who leave an everlasting impact on us.. an amazing work which explains the importance and the impact of those special people in our life. great one! !
You feel her ‘Inside-In’ and ‘Outside-Out’…she is every where in your subconscious surfacing to conscious resulted in such beautiful peace… Enjoyed Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK
'I feel her within; I feel her without' these two lines attract me most in this sweet worded 'she' poem wherein the word 'feel' used in dual meaning...artistic, Sarvesh...10
being an indian u mite know the ardha nareeshwar concept She is within you n she s the one who made you thinkthis way nice work
Its nice one Mitra! Intense and beautifully written. You think a lot about her na?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Savesh, this total immersion is fantastic.