She Can Make Me Go Astray! Poem by Asif Andalib
She Can Make Me Go Astray!
So many years of hardship
So many nights of lost sleep
So many days of heart-thief
So many tears of love's grief
I don't know if it will come to an end
Since she has proved she is no more my friend!
Now she is like a snake with two faces
So she can bite me from both the places
Whether I am near or far away!
Alas! She can make me go astray!
this is a very unique poem in all iuts aspects i just simply love it good job and keep writing, love, Tin Mouse
Pararhyme hardship/sleep interesting. Lines eight and nine strained, almost funny which I don't believe was your intention probably rhyming faces with places.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 12:55:00 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Keep writing..... Simple easy to understand