Thursday, February 17, 2022

She Fought Back Against Abuse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thru hardened eyes I saw them take you out the front door
Thru hardened eyes the abuse would be no more.
No longer will you use me as a punching bag because I fought
Back and I'm glad.
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Bharati Nayak 22 February 2022

It takes a lot of of courage to fight domestic violence.It is a reality that domestic violence exists across globe. Those who suffer are in vulnerable positions and can not voice.So most of the cases go unreported.A very powerful write, thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 19 February 2022

Superb. Powerfully and movingly penned with conviction.

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Nabakishore Dash 18 February 2022

heart touching poem of sad domestic violence nicely expressed.

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Jayne Davies 18 February 2022

Very touching. But it must be stopped x

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 February 2022

Most pertinent issue highlighted in a very meaningful manner. Kudos to the poet. Top score

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Louis Rams 18 February 2022

Thanks for your kind words

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 February 2022

Domestic violence is the gravest abuse women face everywhere in the world. They should not put up with abuse of any kind. Resorting to frying pans could prove dangerous. Women should take recourse to law to protect themselves

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Louis Rams 18 February 2022

At times when the law does not work, you have toto defend yourself

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Louis Rams 18 February 2022

LOL

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Deluke Muwanigwa 17 February 2022

Thank God the ordeal is over. Didn't realise frying pans can be flying pans. Great poem

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Louis Rams 18 February 2022

Thanks

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Evelyn Morianos 17 February 2022

Very powerful. Enough is enough.

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Louis Rams 18 February 2022

Heartfelt

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2022

5 Stars for this touching poem about abuse, sure a very painful occurrence.Thank you for sharing this fascinating poem.

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