She Has Gone Now Poem by Valerie Dohren

She Has Gone Now

Rating: 5.0


She has gone now, lost to dreaming
High above the vapoured clouds -
As a wispy phantom drifting;
Wrapped within enfolded shrouds

No more words to stir my being
Nor beguile my fretted mind -
Silent as the moon yet fading;
With my life no more to bind

She has gone now, I remaining
E'er to dwell in solitude -
So bereft of thoughts to ponder;
For my heart be now subdued

Shall I reach out, try to touch her
As she floats through ether's void -
Yet I fear I may not grasp her;
Thus my spirit be destroyed

She has gone now, I am pleading
Her return will ne'er be long -
She has gone now, I am waiting;
And in waiting, sing her song

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My fickle Muse.....!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 24 February 2013

Beautiful poem Val - simple as that.

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Owain Glyn 23 February 2013

As usual a very clever write1

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 February 2013

Every poet experiences this flight of Muse now and then! She is very much with you now, else you couldn't have written this grand poem! !

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Neela Nath Das 21 February 2013

So melodious it is. The ray of optimism is peeping wonderfully.Hats off dear Val.

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Valsa said it right... She is vey much within you Valerie. This optimism sounds good and you belong to a world desirable for all with such soft thoughts

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Danny Draper 13 March 2013

And what a song in waiting sung and in each word an enduring meliferous note that shall hold its place and beckon her til by her volition she is returned with grace. A lovely poem, thank you Valerie.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 March 2013

Wonderful piece of writing.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 05 March 2013

Absolutely beautiful...A heart tender! Love the sentiment!

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Unwritten Soul 02 March 2013

Val, your tone always soft and enticing! beautiful and it really amazing...she has gone but your muse is always exist _Soul

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Dee Corpolongo 28 February 2013

Oh, such amazing beauty....put together into words...Excellentl, Val. Beautiful flow and soft rhythm filled with grace and beauty abound.

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