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‘she Looks Into Me…’

Rating: 3.1
She looks into me
The unknowing heart
To see if I love
She has confidence she forgets
Under the clouds of her eyelids
Her head falls asleep in my hands
Where are we
Together inseparable
Alive alive
He alive she alive
And my head rolls through her dreams.
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Adeeb Alfateh 14 October 2019
Together inseparable Alive alive He alive she alive And my head rolls through her dreams. great great poem written great 10++
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Savita Tyagi 14 October 2019
Beautiful imagery. All we need to feel is the joy of being alive.
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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 October 2019
An excellent poem with an emphasis on feelings from the heart. Great images, however, the last line " detracts from the poem overall." Picturing a rolling head is way too vivid for my imagination. : -)
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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 October 2019
Great imagery in this poem that is illustrative of the author's love. The last line " And my head rolls through her dreams" is a bit confusing and detracts from the poem. Overall a great write. : -)
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Anil Kumar Panda 14 October 2019
Excellent poetry. Strong and powerful imagery. Like to read again and again. So nice.
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Uche Nwanze 14 October 2019
'Where are we together inseparable, Alive Alive: Poem is very creative and beautifully crafted.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2019
Together inseparable Alive alive........here is the essence of the poem. A brilliant poem in brief by Paul Eluard is well executed.
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Mahtab Bangalee 14 October 2019
Together inseparable Alive alive He alive she alive/// beautiful expression on the love
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Aniruddha Pathak 14 October 2019
Falling asleep and dreaming in mutual closeness, as the poem goes its small length, the reader too tends to dream, half alive, half asleep, vaguely in dream.
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Dominic Windram 14 October 2019
Beautiful poem...expressing deep communion between lovers. Indeed, I would suggest that it exemplifies Martin Buber's notion of the I - Thou.
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