Jazlle D. H.

Rookie (22nd January / Valenzuela)

She's Like A River - Poem by Jazlle D. H.

As I gaze
in every angle
I cannot resist.
The warm appearance
caught my attention.
The silent flow
it seems alluring,
calm yet so deep.

6th May 2008


Comments about She's Like A River by Jazlle D. H.

  • (6/24/2009 2:23:00 AM)


    love your small poems like this one..few words and few lines but you do a long story and issue discussed inside.. well done... I really enjoyed this one and read few times to feel and enjoy it...really a great piece of poem..with rich idea...10+++++++++ (Report) Reply

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  • Tango (1/1/2009 2:05:00 PM)


    This poem says so much in so few words.
    Well done, Tango.
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  • (8/30/2008 6:09:00 PM)


    Wow! That is a wonderful metaphor. You accomplish the seemingly impossible for me. I find it very difficult to express myself in such few words. This poem is beautiful! You are very talented in your work. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/28/2008 12:06:00 PM)


    Small is beautiful, u proved it. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Balch (8/27/2008 2:56:00 AM)


    Short, but a very nice piece regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2008 11:21:00 PM)


    Gentle tone, and tempting words. Lovely poem, all the best (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2008 4:42:00 AM)


    nice poem.....flow like a river (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2008 2:12:00 AM)


    I enjoy the hypnotic feel I get when reading this poem.
    It has an 'undercurrent' of entrapment. One that is invited.
    Nice.
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  • (7/7/2008 3:20:00 AM)


    write best in words
    The silent flow
    it seems alluring,
    calm
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  • (7/6/2008 6:52:00 AM)


    well, tell me, who is she? ...a short nice poem piece... (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (7/6/2008 6:08:00 AM)


    I like this simple poem
    Great write.
    Thanks for sharing
    Ravi
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  • (7/6/2008 5:50:00 AM)


    Delicate and soft by nature, well done

    Love duncan X
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  • (7/4/2008 11:47:00 AM)


    This is a great metaphor =)
    I like this one.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 8, 2008


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