She's Like A River Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

She's Like A River

Rating: 4.4

As I gaze
in every angle
I cannot resist.
The warm appearance
caught my attention.
The silent flow
it seems alluring,
calm yet so deep.

6th May 2008

Dan Gelinas 04 July 2008

This is a great metaphor =) I like this one.

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Duncan Wyllie 06 July 2008

Delicate and soft by nature, well done Love duncan X

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 July 2008

I like this simple poem Great write. Thanks for sharing Ravi

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Kesav Easwaran 06 July 2008

well, tell me, who is she? ...a short nice poem piece...

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Kee Thampi 07 July 2008

write best in words The silent flow it seems alluring, calm

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

love your small poems like this one..few words and few lines but you do a long story and issue discussed inside.. well done... I really enjoyed this one and read few times to feel and enjoy it...really a great piece of poem..with rich idea...10+++++++++

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Tango 01 January 2009

This poem says so much in so few words. Well done, Tango.

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Maura Sanchez 30 August 2008

Wow! That is a wonderful metaphor. You accomplish the seemingly impossible for me. I find it very difficult to express myself in such few words. This poem is beautiful! You are very talented in your work.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 August 2008

Small is beautiful, u proved it.

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Tom Balch 27 August 2008

Short, but a very nice piece regards Tom

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