As I gaze
in every angle
I cannot resist.
The warm appearance
caught my attention.
The silent flow
it seems alluring,
calm yet so deep.
6th May 2008
love your small poems like this one..few words and few lines but you do a long story and issue discussed inside.. well done... I really enjoyed this one and read few times to feel and enjoy it...really a great piece of poem..with rich idea...10+++++++++
Wow! That is a wonderful metaphor. You accomplish the seemingly impossible for me. I find it very difficult to express myself in such few words. This poem is beautiful! You are very talented in your work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a great metaphor =) I like this one.