Shell Of Tears! ! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Shell Of Tears! !

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When thou break the shell of tear
I see there a world of cheers.
Where I begin to breathe eternity
Like thine solemn jannitor of purity.
Wilt thou put me again in a shell?
Will have I to live there like in a hell?
E'erything will be changed in time:
The cheers and the happiness
Of the peers' and their greatness;
Thy kith and kin and all the prime
And thou wilt see nothing all around,
When they lead thee to burial ground.
Though this life may lose surrealism;
My soul will enter His Imperialism.

Sunday, December 18, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 December 2011

i value the way u think st this young age. good

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Shamba Kaunda 28 December 2011

what a way to play with words nyc job

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Neetha Sasidharan 28 December 2011

nice rhyming words n nice idea

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Vishnudev Murikkanattil 26 December 2011

Great theme. Brilliant presentation.Apt usage.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 December 2011

an advanced thought from a youth

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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Hey, are you really from Kerala? What a classy style! ! ! .......10***** Rose,

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Blossom Mist 05 January 2012

WOW! ! ! it is an amazing poem... speaks a lot... n delivers a lot! ! ! Absolutely loved reading it.... it has a classical touch too..........

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..i admire this brilliant piece of writing my friend.. ..you really are good...this was an amazing poem... ..i just loved reading it.. ..

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Supriya Prathapan 02 January 2012

This poem adds beauty to the very idea of Death. Well written.

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Areeba Sohail 01 January 2012

uffff great write! wonderrful!

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