M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Shining Star - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Someone said to me;
Far away from you
Your lucky star is shining.

Sometimes bright, sometimes faint
but always hanging on you
And decider of your fate.

Miles & miles away,
how can a tiny star
decide my fate I wondered.

I closed my eyes and realized,
Wow I have two little stars brighter
than the star above- my two little eyes.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, motivation

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Shining Star by M. Asim Nehal

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/5/2015 2:49:00 AM)


    Wonderful envision. Nice camparison of two little eyes with two shining stars. Amusing one. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/5/2015 3:45:00 AM)

    Thank u so much for lovely comments.

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  • (9/5/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    Nice replacement of believes.........Good Job again. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/5/2015 1:59:00 AM)


    so true.. I also always wonder like you
    Miles & miles away,
    how can a tiny star
    decide my fate...

    thank you. loved it.
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/5/2015 3:44:00 AM)

    Thanks Much...I appreciate your comments, thanks again.

    (9/5/2015 2:15:00 AM)

    I agree with your views.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2015



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