Shining Star Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Shining Star

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Someone said to me;
Far away from you
Your lucky star is shining.

Sometimes bright, sometimes faint
but always hanging on you
And decider of your fate.

Miles & miles away,
how can a tiny star
decide my fate I wondered.

I closed my eyes and realized,
Wow I have two little stars brighter
than the star above- my two little eyes.

Saturday, September 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,motivation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 06 January 2021

Very well written poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2015

Wonderful envision. Nice camparison of two little eyes with two shining stars. Amusing one. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 05 September 2015

Thank u so much for lovely comments.

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T Rajan Evol 05 September 2015

Nice replacement of believes.........Good Job again.

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Sanjukta Nag 05 September 2015

so true.. I also always wonder like you Miles & miles away, how can a tiny star decide my fate... thank you. loved it.

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M Asim Nehal 05 September 2015

Thanks Much...I appreciate your comments, thanks again.

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T Rajan Evol 05 September 2015

I agree with your views.

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