Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 16,824 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

>Short Break - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Is it I am running short of break?
Is it break running short of me?
Is it I am breaking it short?
Is it short breaking me?
Well break is a break
When both mixed together
They look somewhat like this
Am I right?

Dear readers and poets,
I am taking short break for a while.
This poem unexpectedly came into top five poems.

Please feel free to throw any comments
I am ready to catch it smilingly! ! ! !

I am ready
Start striking!

Thank You! ! ! !

© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

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Comments about >Short Break by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Susan Williams (3/29/2016 10:17:00 PM)

    Excellent! ! ! You draw people to you! ! ! ! I imagine an encounter with you at the grocery store would be a enlivening experience! ! ! I am browsing through your poems, getting a sense of who you are and so far you charming me but my computer is not working so I shall close (Report) Reply

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  • (1/5/2015 6:33:00 PM)

    It's a wonderful poem...................10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/26/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    There is something in this poem that everyone sees his sentiments in it and he is constrained to like it. (Report) Reply

  • Asit Kumar Sanyal (8/31/2014 6:14:00 AM)

    Fantastic. The poem is in the modern and decent form. First stanza of the poem is more attractive. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    I am ready
    Start striking! .. nice feeling

    yes time is short
    to report
    for failure
    or success for sure
    (Report) Reply

  • Emeyazia Iwe Chukwudi (1/29/2014 10:14:00 PM)

    Geetha, wud miss u dearly! (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Dinesh Sir, Thanks for the lovely comment. I am just thinking to keep this poem as it is...So that when ever I feel to break anyones head with my poems...... I can just refresh it again and again..... (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (1/24/2014 9:52:00 AM)

    Now, it is time, you may delete this comment Geetha. Your hibernation has come to an end. (Report) Reply

  • (1/23/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    Your first stanza works tremendously well. But the poem goes downhill from there. Constant repetition of the word break might have been done to introduce the effect of the poetic device but it hinders the smooth flow of the poem. The sound of the word BREAK jars after a point. (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (1/22/2014 8:53:00 PM)

    You throw the comments
    I am ready to catch it...

    I am ready
    Start Striking.....
    liked these lines
    (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (1/19/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    throwing comment and ready to catch, pure heart's call, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (1/11/2014 8:10:00 AM)

    Looking forward to hearing from you soon Geetha. I hope the sun will shine on you. Keep smiling (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/9/2014 2:25:00 AM)

    rest of the news after the commercial.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014

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