>Short Break Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

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Looking forward to hearing from you soon Geetha. I hope the sun will shine on you. Keep smiling

throwing comment and ready to catch, pure heart's call, thanks.

You throw the comments I am ready to catch it... I am ready Start Striking..... liked these lines

Your first stanza works tremendously well. But the poem goes downhill from there. Constant repetition of the word break might have been done to introduce the effect of the poetic device but it hinders the smooth flow of the poem. The sound of the word BREAK jars after a point.

This is what I too am in need now..you have said it very interestingly...like this poem a lot- ++10

Excellent! ! ! You draw people to you! ! ! ! I imagine an encounter with you at the grocery store would be a enlivening experience! ! ! I am browsing through your poems, getting a sense of who you are and so far you charming me but my computer is not working so I shall close

It's a wonderful poem...................10

There is something in this poem that everyone sees his sentiments in it and he is constrained to like it.

Fantastic. The poem is in the modern and decent form. First stanza of the poem is more attractive.