Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 16,714 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Untold Words! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Your every untold words spoke of love.
Your visuals spoke of love in silence.
I felt each words poured from your heart.
I can feel your presence somewhere nearby.
Far from somehere it came,
All the way around and reached me.

I know it spoke of love.
I know they were meant for me.
I could feel each word.
Though tough for one to understand,
But they spoke of love and pain as well.

I am very happy with that
You understand me so well
I am obliged you are a gem of a person
I have known.
These qualities put you high in my thoughts.
All I can tell is I adore you from my heart.

Love doesn't mean achieving what you want.
Love also means understanding one of the heart.
Love also means sacrificing the one you love.
Giving up is also a love.

Love has dimensional perspective.
It can be taken in any way you want.
Love has different colors
You can paint love in any colors you want.
Actually, Love has no shape nor any colors
Its we give shape and colors.

© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights reserved.

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Topic(s) of this poem: love, poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My english version is Untold words!
My hindi version is Ankahe Alfaaz.

Comments about Untold Words! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 3:12:00 AM)


    Thank you so much Akhtarji for the beautiful comment. (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:59:00 AM)


    Thank you Robert so much for taking time to comment on my poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (11/3/2017 9:40:00 PM)


    A great poem this is with broader of aspect of love for society and life. You have said many things true with your tender words of expression within untold words. These untold words are expressed from love silently and each word is poured from heart. The presence of love is beautifully felt nearby. Beautiful thoughts carry beautiful words and we feel these interestingly. Love has many dimensional perspectives and different colours like the rainbow in sky. Nobody easily can determine shape of love. But everyone can feel this in mind and heart. Love reaches into every corner of the world. This is very true. A beautiful poem this is and really outstanding one. Congratulations! A nice poem of the day of on 2nd November 2017 as this has flashed in main page....10 (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:36:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Ma'am for the valuable comment. Thank you for your time.

  • (11/2/2017 8:59:00 PM)


    Beautiful ode to love, Geetha. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day! (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 3:04:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Richard for liking my poem.

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:36:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Richard taking time to comment on my poem.

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (11/2/2017 5:30:00 PM)


    Such a lovely poem pf the day, Geetha... congrats for being chosen...10+++++ (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:37:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Bernard for beautiful comment.

  • Muzahidul Reza (11/2/2017 4:40:00 PM)


    Untold words may mean more and much, fantastic poem. Congrats and thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:38:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Muzahidul for taking time time to comment on my poem.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/2/2017 2:32:00 PM)


    Far from somewhere it came! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:39:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Edward for taking time to comment on my poem.

  • (11/2/2017 1:54:00 PM)


    The power of love is very well presented in this poem.Indeed, even in silence we can hear it. Even in its farthest, we can feel it. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:40:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Rose Marie for the beautiful comment.

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (11/2/2017 12:45:00 PM)


    So good to see you as the poetess of the day, Geetha!
    Hearty congratulations!
    Untold words or Ankahe Alfaaz is a marvellous poem that speaks of love in silence.
    Love has different colors

    You can paint love in any colors you want.
    Actually, Love has no shape nor any colors
    Its we give shape and colors.

    Beautifully painted with varied hues of love.
    (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:40:00 AM)

    Thank you Doctor for the beautiful comment.

  • Savita Tyagi (11/2/2017 12:20:00 PM)


    Love has many dimensions. It can be taken and shared any way one wants. It is simplest of emotions yet covers the most complex depths of human heart. Beautiful poem narrating love’s many aspects. Congratulations Geetha for well deserved member poem place. (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:41:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Savita for the beautiful comment.

  • Sabita Sahoo (11/2/2017 11:53:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem on love shared.
    Congratulations for the selection.
    (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:41:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Sabita for taking time to comment on my poem.

  • Kishore Kumar Das (11/2/2017 11:53:00 AM)


    Untold words can act as a major source of obsession turning into 'love'...you have struck the right cord.......magnetic feelings haunt the mind opening new vistas of love....a common syndrome you have translated into poetry.....congrats to you for your splendid poem being chosen as the poem of the day... (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:44:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Kishore ji for the wonderful comment.

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/2/2017 11:52:00 AM)


    You can paint love in any colors you want.
    Actually, Love has no shape nor any colors
    Its we give shape and colors.

    You have painted the love in all possible colours. A rare poem shared. Thanks for the poem and congrats for the POTD.
    Subhas
    (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:45:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Subhas Ji for the beautiful comment for my poem.

  • Bharati Nayak (11/2/2017 9:43:00 AM)


    Love has dimensional perspective.
    It can be taken in any way you want.
    Love has different colors
    You can paint love in any colors you want.
    Actually, Love has no shape nor any colors
    Its we give shape and colors.- - - - - Just love this painting of love.Congratulations for being selected as Poet of the Day for this well deserving poem.
    (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:46:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Bharati for the beautiful comment for my poem.

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/2/2017 8:15:00 AM)


    If and when they are expressed, untold words are definitely stronger than words come off lips; because they arise from the bottom of the heart. Thanks for the wonderful poem.X (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/2/2017 8:01:00 AM)


    Thanks for the sensational poem spilling with romance. Congrats for being the most deserving member's PoD. X (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:47:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Sir for the beautiful comment for my poem.

  • Rini Jerry (11/2/2017 7:38:00 AM)


    Congratulations for poem of the day Geetha.. The silence speaks, the untold words touches the heart.. Well penned (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:47:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Rini for the beautiful comment.

  • Ruby Mostazir (11/2/2017 7:34:00 AM)


    Love has different colors
    You can paint love in any colors you want.
    Actually, Love has no shape nor any colors
    Its we give shape and colors.
    Wonderful poem... congrats for being selected as a poem of the day!
    (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 3:02:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Ruby for taking time to comment on my poem.

  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/2/2017 7:27:00 AM)


    Definition of love very nicely and rightly narrated.
    'Love has dimensional perspective.
    It can be taken in any way you want.
    Love has different colors
    You can paint love in any colors you want.
    Actually, Love has no shape nor any colors
    Its we give shape and colors.'... is the gist of the poem. The flow and concept simply amazing. Congrats.
    (Report) Reply

    Geetha Jayakumar (11/5/2017 2:48:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Anil Ji for taking time to comment on my poem.

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/2/2017 4:14:00 AM)


    Congrats, a wonderful poem that touches the heart at once. Untold words are more powerful than the told words, as these words aretold and listened to by eyes, the best translator of a heart. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 27, 2017


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