(I.)
Joy-
see scenery of seasons
savor poetry and painting
undisturbed.
(II.)
Upset-
to rush around ever blind,
as Time flows away
traceless.
(III.)
Bustle-
joyous crowd of holiday shoppers
bright flowers bought
regardless of price.
Oct.18th,2008. An early practice.
Scenery of season motivates mind and we easily perceive nature with thought ad perception. A nice poem is beautifully penned...10
Well expressive poem with lovely theme. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Upset- / to rush around ever blind, / as Time flows away / traceless. [- - Now this is a demonstration of the power inherent in brevity when the image is painted vividly with the exact right words. Well-done, Perdita! ! ! !