Short Poem ~ 15 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem ~ 15

Rating: 5.0


It was a windy day
River winding in and out
Under the wide valley of life
Surrounded by a landscape
He stood out against the sky
Saw life crawling like a tortoise
And death hovering like an eagle.

Monday, June 13, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 14 June 2022

So beautiful. A philosophical write nicely worded. Loved it.

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From the skies, life on earth would seem to crawl.

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Indira Renganathan 30 June 2022

'He stood out against the sky Saw life crawling like a tortoise And death hovering like an eagle.'.....brilliant write, , , , ,5*****

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Saw life crawling like a tortoise And death hovering like an eagle....Brilliant...10

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Awesome! dear Asim ji! Vivid images through this poem - more fascinating than even a movie!

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Anjandev Roy 15 June 2022

......like an eagle.....excellent.....

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Deepak S S 14 June 2022

Succinct poem, Nicely written, FS

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