Short Poem ~ Goals Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem ~ Goals

Rating: 5.0


With so much thought In my mind ~
I slip into the sea to reach the depth.
Where I find they swim along ~
To the shore of achievements.

Friday, February 3, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: goals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ricky Mangathen 03 February 2023

All in peace and harmony. Fabulous poem. Inspiring.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 February 2023

When wisdom overflows we tend to go in silence and then we realise all our dreams coming true. So is our life on earth, If we all know how to live in harmony. Wonderful poem Asim, Too good in four lines.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 February 2023

Swimming towards the shore of achievement......brilliant dear Asimji.......10 + To my favourite

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 February 2023

Bravo My friend Asim Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 05 February 2023

Simply amazing......thank u, dear friend......

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

Where I find they swim along ~ To the shore of achievements~nice

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Gordon Walter 03 February 2023

Where I find they swim along ~ To the shore of achievements. I can see them thru my mind. Great write.

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