Short Poem About Life Poem by sarah shahzad
Short Poem About Life
Short Poems About Life
Slug - Free Verse Poem
.That slippery slime,
.That crawls out of damp places,
.In the sorrowful night,
.It wishes to find a home,
.A home of vegetables is like a dream,
.If it was a dream like no wonder any slug likes one,
.When they crawl out in the day light,
.In the garden full of vegetables,
.Their dream becomes one.
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(Sarah Shahzad, November 2019)
Once that slug finds a dream place to live, it gets more predators and ultimately that dreamy life is very short.
Contrite heart may not lead to disappointment. However, we are in search of better life hence the dreamy life is short. Thoughtful read!
When they crawl out in the day light, .In the garden full of vegetables, .Their dream becomes one. fine thoughts dear poetess.. Once that slug finds a dream place to live, it gets more predators and ultimately that dreamy life is very short. thank u dear poetess. tony
Sarah, thank you for comments on my poems. I like the analogy in this write about the perfect life and how many sought after it only to be disappointed when they feel they have acquired it, I agree with Bri's comments, most look for the perfect life, but most are disappointed. If they do find the perfect life, they'll have to watch out for the predators So is it really perfect? Good write and thank you for sharing! Keep writing xo
The poem is ok, but i like the Poet's Notes more. i do NOT think " most of us" dream of living a perfect life, but those who DO will surely....'mostly'...be disappointed. : ( when a slug finds a " dream place to live" .....I, BRI, become one of its predators! they are better than hamburgers with ketchup/catsup, and almost as good as chocolate cake! ! Almost. bri :)
What's not perfect about a bird getting a great meal and then pooping in the veggie garden and laying eggs in a nest in a tree close by? All phases perhaps are perfect? Keep writing, it's pure namaste
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the day light yeah the day light is the perfect time for fulfilling the dream of life! o yeah, day light yeah in time doing is the sign of fulfilling the dream of life!
thank's & Bless and love dear..
such a lovely thought thanks for comment.