sarah shahzad

Silver Star - 3,444 Points (1/1/1990 / pakistan)

Water On Earth Save Water - Poem by sarah shahzad

Save Water

Free Verse Poem

.We drink and use water,

.Without knowing what it does,

.What benefits it gives,

.Water is around but has decreased,

.Without knowing that the world is drying,

.Before the leaves get crooked up as life,

.We need to save water, to save our life,

.Water helps everything,

.As we need to help it too,

.We do not need water just to drink and use,

.We need it, to help it, so it can help us too.

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(Sarah Shahzad, November 2019)

Topic(s) of this poem: poems

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Water is the basic human and all living beings essential requirement. Human body need enough water to support daily chores.As it is considered as essential element of any living being therefore it is called Life as well.
We have a lot of content and literature available on water and how to save or conserve it.After air, we have most important need is water.Without food people may survive for more than 30 days but without water, one cannot survive for only few days.
I have come across a beautiful poem on "save water, Sarah has captured this concept well.Few verses are as follows: poem about life

Comments about Water On Earth Save Water by sarah shahzad

  • Queeny GonaQueeny Gona (2/11/2020 8:23:00 PM)

    Save water, save energy.... Need of the hour. Looking forward to see more of this kind of message oriented poems. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (12/25/2019 12:59:00 PM)

    A timely warning through a nice poem. (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/26/2019 12:54:00 AM)

    Many thanks for your appreciation! ! !

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  • Bernard SnyderBernard Snyder (12/23/2019 8:09:00 PM)

    Water is very much a necessity as you nicely described. Continue with your passion to write. The world can never have enough poetry. Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/28/2019 12:34:00 AM)

    thanks for nice feedback! :)

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  • Chuy AmanteChuy Amante (12/23/2019 12:27:00 PM)

    Water, air, sunlight, it is all life. Life never disappears, it moves around a bit.
    Potable, pee, ocean, mist, it's all perfect no?
    Peace SS
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    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/28/2019 12:33:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for your kind words... Bless and love :)

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  • Tom Allport (12/22/2019 7:32:00 AM)

    A thought provoking write without water the future is draught! .....well penned. (Report)Reply

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (12/21/2019 2:53:00 PM)

    " .Water helps everything, " Tell a wood fire THAT! !

    I wonder why the author puts a period at the start of each line. It is 'unique', but why do it, other than to be unique?

    bri

    :)

    i do not return to read any responses to my comments.
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    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/26/2019 1:04:00 AM)

    Many thanks for your comments. Really appreciate for you to bring this up. I am not sure about why I do it, may be its a style.
    I totally understand that you won't read my reply but these comments are necessary for me to look into in respect of improvements. Thats why I love this website! ! ! !
    Respect SS

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (12/20/2019 6:40:00 AM)

    A very informative poem.
    Water water everywhere
    But flooding,
    Water water nowhere
    Will be flooding....
    No drop to drink.
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  • Chan MongolChan Mongol (12/19/2019 8:58:00 AM)

    We take vital things for granted! But time has come to check and consume things in productive ways. Enough pollution and damages done! I love the poem. The poem tells us that water is sacred. Water gives the life. Well written. Thank you honorable poet.. ____+++10. (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/20/2019 4:01:00 AM)

    https: //poemtheart, thank you :)

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/20/2019 3:59:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated, & visit my amazing website please https: //poemtheart,

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  • Rosie BourgetRosie Bourget (12/16/2019 9:06:00 AM)

    We definitely need to save water because without water there is no life. You wrote an excellent piece about how important water is in our lives. Awesome job Sarah. (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/16/2019 11:10:00 PM)

    Thanks for the kind visit..

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (12/13/2019 4:11:00 PM)

    Most live our every day with running water, how fortunate we are. To have been raised using rainwater for almost everything I now see a change of drought and water restrictions.
    Australian farmers are really suffering at present with summer and fires.
    This fast techno world seems to bring carelessness for the future.
    Thank You Sarah
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  • Carl RoussellCarl Roussell (12/13/2019 7:44:00 AM)

    I like how you say to help it so it can help us, we are all part of the one system of nature (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (12/12/2019 2:08:00 AM)

    Water is vital, and yet we pollute it. This poem joins Leonardo DiCaprio's campaign! (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/12/2019 3:48:00 AM)

    Thank you my poetic friend..

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (12/11/2019 12:48:00 PM)

    I love this poem so beautifully written. We need water to survive and we should be taking care of this planet for future generations to live and love. Great write! (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/12/2019 1:31:00 AM)

    I am glad you like it.. :)

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/12/2019 1:24:00 AM)

    I am glad you like it..

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  • Chan MongolChan Mongol (12/11/2019 10:44:00 AM)

    An alarming condition has been pointed out by the honorable poet. Basic ingredients for life are air, water, heat and soil. But over population and human pollutions are destroying the environment. We have to be concerned on that. My most poems are on environment also. Very well written, ++10. (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/12/2019 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for your kind words... Bless and love

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  • Tamara Beryl LathamTamara Beryl Latham (12/10/2019 11:02:00 AM)

    Sarah, your poem speaks to the hearts and minds of your fellow poets. You give us an important lesson on the necessity of water in our daily lives in poetry format. Great job and thanks for posting. : -) (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/12/2019 1:27:00 AM)

    Thank you for taking the time to read it.. love

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (12/10/2019 4:04:00 AM)

    save the water
    save the life
    save the world
    and make the world heaven!
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    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/10/2019 5:25:00 AM)

    that's all true just you say :) thank you..

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (12/9/2019 5:50:00 AM)

    An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction.
    Thanks for sharing, Sarah.
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    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/10/2019 1:16:00 AM)

    Thank you for taking the time to read it..

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (12/6/2019 3:13:00 AM)

    PS. I like the photograph added here. I regard this poem as my Birthday present, sans that you knew.TFS (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (12/6/2019 3:09:00 AM)

    Perfect Poem about WATER and that submitted on my Birthday! Hurray! Life needs water, not only for human, all creatures upon this earth need WATER, the trees and trunks too. Without WATER, we will die within perhaps a month, a week..............Thanks for sharing, a perfect poem poetically presented, poetess. A 10 Full Score and myriad of 10´s more. Keep on creating. God´s Blessings in Abundance. Amen. (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(12/11/2019 9:27:00 AM)

    I thank YOU dear Sarah, YOU created this marvelous poem, absolute a Topper, since the theme is about the world's most important topic and YOU have chosen that. That's an amazing choice, Sarah!

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/6/2019 4:30:00 AM)

    very beautiful and thought touching words..! ! thank's for wonderful feedback..

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/6/2019 4:10:00 AM)

    very beautiful and thought touching words... Bless and love

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/6/2019 3:58:00 AM)

    this is a very beautiful and thought touching reply, thank you

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (12/6/2019 1:30:00 AM)

    Write comment. Such a nice topic and a fine start with a beautiful poem, Sarah. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks. (Report)Reply

    Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad(12/6/2019 3:48:00 AM)

    thank for your lovely reply & i will read yours too..

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 22, 2019

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 27, 2019


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