Short Poem About Life Poem by sarah shahzad

Short Poem About Life

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Short Poems About Life

Slug - Free Verse Poem

.That slippery slime,

.That crawls out of damp places,

.In the sorrowful night,

.It wishes to find a home,

.A home of vegetables is like a dream,

.If it was a dream like no wonder any slug likes one,

.When they crawl out in the day light,

.In the garden full of vegetables,

.Their dream becomes one.

source: poemtheart.com

(Sarah Shahzad, November 2019)

Short Poem About Life
Tuesday, November 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Most of us dream of living a perfect life but that is impossible.every stage of life has different challanges and we spend most if our lives to attempt these challanges. source: poem about life

Once that slug finds a dream place to live, it gets more predators and ultimately that dreamy life is very short.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 10 December 2019

the day light yeah the day light is the perfect time for fulfilling the dream of life! o yeah, day light yeah in time doing is the sign of fulfilling the dream of life!

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

thank's & Bless and love dear..

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

such a lovely thought thanks for comment.

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Queeny Gona 05 April 2020

Contrite heart may not lead to disappointment. However, we are in search of better life hence the dreamy life is short. Thoughtful read!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 January 2020

When they crawl out in the day light, .In the garden full of vegetables, .Their dream becomes one. fine thoughts dear poetess.. Once that slug finds a dream place to live, it gets more predators and ultimately that dreamy life is very short. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Sarah Shahzad 27 January 2020

I appreciate thanks for comment :)

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Aqua Flower 25 January 2020

Sarah, thank you for comments on my poems. I like the analogy in this write about the perfect life and how many sought after it only to be disappointed when they feel they have acquired it, I agree with Bri's comments, most look for the perfect life, but most are disappointed. If they do find the perfect life, they'll have to watch out for the predators So is it really perfect? Good write and thank you for sharing! Keep writing xo

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Sarah Shahzad 27 January 2020

thank you so much..

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Bri Edwards 11 January 2020

The poem is ok, but i like the Poet's Notes more. i do NOT think " most of us" dream of living a perfect life, but those who DO will surely....'mostly'...be disappointed. : ( when a slug finds a " dream place to live" .....I, BRI, become one of its predators! they are better than hamburgers with ketchup/catsup, and almost as good as chocolate cake! ! Almost. bri :)

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Chuy Amante 23 December 2019

What's not perfect about a bird getting a great meal and then pooping in the veggie garden and laying eggs in a nest in a tree close by? All phases perhaps are perfect? Keep writing, it's pure namaste

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