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Short Poem About Life

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Short Poems About Life

Slug - Free Verse Poem

.That slippery slime,

.That crawls out of damp places,

.In the sorrowful night,
.It wishes to find a home,
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Short Poem About Life
Tuesday, November 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Most of us dream of living a perfect life but that is impossible.every stage of life has different challanges and we spend most if our lives to attempt these challanges. source: poem about life

Once that slug finds a dream place to live, it gets more predators and ultimately that dreamy life is very short.
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Queeny Gona 05 April 2020
Contrite heart may not lead to disappointment. However, we are in search of better life hence the dreamy life is short. Thoughtful read!
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 January 2020
When they crawl out in the day light, .In the garden full of vegetables, .Their dream becomes one. fine thoughts dear poetess.. Once that slug finds a dream place to live, it gets more predators and ultimately that dreamy life is very short. thank u dear poetess. tony
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Sarah Shahzad 27 January 2020
I appreciate thanks for comment :)
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Aqua Flower 25 January 2020
Sarah, thank you for comments on my poems. I like the analogy in this write about the perfect life and how many sought after it only to be disappointed when they feel they have acquired it, I agree with Bri's comments, most look for the perfect life, but most are disappointed. If they do find the perfect life, they'll have to watch out for the predators So is it really perfect? Good write and thank you for sharing! Keep writing xo
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Sarah Shahzad 27 January 2020
thank you so much..
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Bri Edwards 11 January 2020
The poem is ok, but i like the Poet's Notes more. i do NOT think " most of us" dream of living a perfect life, but those who DO will surely....'mostly'...be disappointed. : ( when a slug finds a " dream place to live" .....I, BRI, become one of its predators! they are better than hamburgers with ketchup/catsup, and almost as good as chocolate cake! ! Almost. bri :)
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Chuy Amante 23 December 2019
What's not perfect about a bird getting a great meal and then pooping in the veggie garden and laying eggs in a nest in a tree close by? All phases perhaps are perfect? Keep writing, it's pure namaste
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Jagdish Singh Ramána 20 December 2019
Wonderful write, dear poet. Interesting poem indeed. I loved reading it.
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Sarah Shahzad 20 December 2019
I am very pleased to hear that you enjoyed it so much. I appreciate
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 December 2019
Write comment. Such a nice pen, Sarah. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
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Sarah Shahzad 17 December 2019
my pleasure & thank's for comment, please check also poemtheart website..
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Gary H 13 December 2019
Thanks for sharing this, goodjob.
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Sarah Shahzad 14 December 2019
I'm happy you like it..
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Valentin Savin 13 December 2019
A very interesting and well thought poem. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
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Sarah Shahzad 14 December 2019
I'm happy that you liked it!
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Sarah Shahzad 14 December 2019
& please check my site poemtheart it realy amazing..! ! & i hope you like it.. :)
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Kostas Lagos 13 December 2019
I really liked this one!
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Sarah Shahzad 14 December 2019
thank you very much.. check my site poemtheart i hope you like it thank you
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