M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,206 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Shot Poem- Emotional Affection - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Emotional affection
differentiates opinions often
leading to chaos and
thin line separates love with hate.

Topic(s) of this poem: emotions, love and art

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Shot Poem- Emotional Affection by M. Asim Nehal

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/24/2015 8:49:00 PM)


    Yes, a thin line separates love and hate. When a child finds that his father, his brothers and his sisters are sharing his mother's love he learns the first lesson of jealousy and this jealousy if increases too much may go on the other side of that thin line. Again when is sufficiently socialized his ego plays its role. He starts thinking, it's my father, it's my brother and it's my sister. He comes back on the right side of this thin line.......................10 (Report) Reply

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  • (10/24/2015 12:31:00 PM)


    Nice short poem with full of meaning, Thanks Asim and God bless u. (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2015 3:23:00 AM)


    That's the spice of love!
    Thanks Asim-10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 9:17:00 PM)


    Deepy envisioned. An emotional love poem nicely presented. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015



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