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playful squirrels on my way
raise their tails run up tree
made a squeaking sound, bites
each other and flee to hide
more came to show their tails
while digging beneath bales

I wonder what drove them home
it could be going away rain;
warmer weather in winter morn
besides that happy day for all
there's group chasing errant ball
not hitting it good, I can recall

Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: wildlife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 28 December 2015

Hello Manonton You have good energy. Couple of typos flea/flee tales/tails errand/errant I shall check out some more of your work. I deal in limericks almost exclusively. Please give me a look.

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Manonton Dalan

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virginia, usa
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