I'm becoming less, as you can see.
Just what am I supposed to be?
I keep losing syllables.
If I don't stop shrinking
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Marvelous nonet, Kim! ! ! I can certainly see why this poem took first place! ! ! Excellent work, thank you so much for sharing : )
This is a fantastic nonet Kim, recently took a stab at trying them myself, deceptively simple but requires a delicate hand. I love this one, it deserved to win an award.
This here is poetic style to a T! You brilliantly display this form of poetry in this excellent nonet! I always love all the persona you weave into your poems! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you to all who have commented on this poem. Your comments are not showing up yet, so I can't respond to them individually.
Wow! That is a marvelous nonet! I can see why it took first place in the contest. It truly deserved to do so. Another great accomplishment for you.
Amazing poem so appropriate for the poetic style. Brilliantly crafted, Kim!
Very cool poem, at first I thought it referenced getting older or either Alzheimer's, I never heard of this type of poem but I think it's cool, thanks Kim
This is a great style of poetry. I may have to give it a go sometime.