Shuffling With My Shoes Poem by Charles M Moore

Shuffling With My Shoes

Rating: 5.0


I've been looking for some time
I've been searching for some sign
walking down a lonely line
shuffling with my shoes

The grass is green along the road
the birds are singing songs they know
but I just wander as I go
shuffling with my shoes

People ignore me
they don't want to know me
a dirty old bum
with a bottle of rum
shuffling with my shoes

I may sleep in ditches
but I've got my riches
as I gaze at the stars
the moon and mars
shuffling with my shoes

The sun hits the horizon
my life ain't surprising
the older I get
the less I regret
shuffling with my shoes

Tomorrow's a new day
once again I'll be on my way
at break of dawn
I'll just soldier on
shuffling with my shoes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 17 June 2006

And life goes on for everyone in different ways... Thanks for bringing lives that we don't think about much to life in your poetry, Charlie. You know, everyone was a baby once (do you know what I mean?) Esther : ]

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Will Barber 05 May 2006

I loved this - your compassion extends to all mankind, I think. Besides, it was just a great read. Your poetry is so lyrical, I'm just envious for a bit. Then grateful for the experience.

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Chuck Audette 06 April 2006

Nice flow and use of the rhymes and repeated lines. Sounds almost like a song. -chuck

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Patricia Gale 25 March 2006

Restless spirit, nicely written Patricia

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Amanda Leah 25 March 2006

I enjoyed this...really great...take care, amanda

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Charles M Moore

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