Shyness Of The Sound, Love Poems Poem by Captain Cur

Shyness Of The Sound, Love Poems

Rating: 2.8


Reciting for me
like you did for your Grandmother
when you were a little girl I
measure the sweet shyness in your voice,
hesitant and soft with emotion. I
listen to the girl in the woman. I
wait for each pausing breath.

Selecting the pieces,
arranging the words that you memorize, I
the teacher, and you my loving student
enter into the fullness of your words
as the modulated shyness falling
from your lips changes you;
the sounding woman in the girl.

Between, in the silence
of the pause, breathing, I
hesitate in the shyness of your lips
and kiss the falling texture of the sound.

Thursday, September 6, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: girl,grandmother,lips,teacher,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 09 September 2012

The pirate has love in his heart as well as breeze from the sea air, a lovely poem

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Valsa George 08 September 2012

You hereby prove that you are not just a master in capturing the fire, fury and the elusive charm of the roaring seas but the beauty and the lure of sounds falling from the lips of a woman and giving it such romantic aura!

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Heather Wilkins 25 May 2013

Every female has a little girl somewhere inside. You have captured this well. Excellent.

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

very musical flow.. lovely!

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

wow... incredible and moving!

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Harriet James 13 September 2012

Wonderful, words kissing words within poems, a lovely lilt to this.

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Very romantic and tender. Lovely.

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