Shyness Of The Sound, Love Poems Poem by Captain Cur

Shyness Of The Sound, Love Poems

Rating: 2.8


Reciting for me
like you did for your Grandmother
when you were a little girl I
measure the sweet shyness in your voice,
hesitant and soft with emotion. I
listen to the girl in the woman. I
wait for each pausing breath.

Selecting the pieces,
arranging the words that you memorize, I
the teacher, and you my loving student
enter into the fullness of your words
as the modulated shyness falling
from your lips changes you;
the sounding woman in the girl.

Between, in the silence
of the pause, breathing, I
hesitate in the shyness of your lips
and kiss the falling texture of the sound.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 08 September 2012

You hereby prove that you are not just a master in capturing the fire, fury and the elusive charm of the roaring seas but the beauty and the lure of sounds falling from the lips of a woman and giving it such romantic aura!

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Heather Wilson 09 September 2012

The pirate has love in his heart as well as breeze from the sea air, a lovely poem

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Heather Wilkins 25 May 2013

Every female has a little girl somewhere inside. You have captured this well. Excellent.

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

very musical flow.. lovely!

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

wow... incredible and moving!

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Harriet James 13 September 2012

Wonderful, words kissing words within poems, a lovely lilt to this.

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Very romantic and tender. Lovely.

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