Silence Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
Silence
my silence is a speech
in my eyes you could read,
you could dive, you could teach.
trying hard being near
but your shores with no reach.
searching you in my all,
your dwelling in my each,
with a misery spattered the soul
my sorrow waiting you,
with the care, me to bleach...
and the labor was the longest
lonely faced with a will
and the love born breech
drowning there in the pain
watched by you from your beach.
little cruel, how to be
waiting you, me to teach
‘…and the love born breech…’ Nice. But a question why breech not head presentation of LOVE? Ten must be. dr. sakti
You know..I'm just speechless about that 'speech which is your silence' how you introduce us at the beggining: 'My silence is a speech..'And the last line...'Waiting you, me to teach' Very beautiful expression! !
Nice wording and concept. Ten+ ++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
The flow of your words and the silence of our souls just so wondefully put together. I really liked it.10+++
the silence of our souls, the voice of our hearts, beautiful poem...: 0)
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nice piece! Silence is an eloquent language! ! ! I like the rhyme! ! ! keep it up! ! !