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Silence

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I once dreamt of an open field,
The bareness of which alone did shield,
A shadow so frail, in a shadow as such
Silence.
I thought as much.

I felt it again on my bed at night
Darkness; through which I saw the light
Silence - to feel; and to feel so weak,
Silence, I think I heard her speak.
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Dev Anand 04 September 2017
Darkness; through which I saw the light Silence - to feel; and to feel so weak, Silence, I think I heard her speak. The Me within, in silence too. personification of silence. this is beautiful. such personification can come only from a poetic heart. thank you dear poetess. dev
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Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it but got confused in the 5th Stanza (last line) - Vain and slain, together abridged. You are referring to Silence and what? There is much power in silence.
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Prasanna Kumari 28 March 2014
the silence dancing in rhyme and rhythm is beautiful with unique and powerful expressions...
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Michelle Claus 28 March 2014
This poem, it enters from the periphery. You use words and syntax in a unique way. This poem is a nice meditation on Silence. Thank you.
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Gajanan Mishra 28 March 2014
good writing, I like it, thanks.
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Besa Dede 01 April 2012
The rhythm of this imagery poem is felt in every stanza. Good use of rhymes and euphemisms. Thank you for sharing ~Besa
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Prasanna Kumari 31 March 2012
you are a gifted writer...and the poem is beautiful with rhyme and rhythm and feeling......
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Kee Thampi 28 March 2012
Words gifted with stature... The crowd through which I made my way, Gave me a second to poise it through Shouts around, though I felt them nay, The Me within, in silence too.
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wonderful poem! bravo! it contains lots of inspiring words and wisdom
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Christopher Cruz 28 March 2012
great very inspiring
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