Silent Watcher Poem by Aden Orie

Interesting poem. I like poems that are open-ended leaving up toi the reader to determine the context. Good job.

nice imagery Aden I like how it got picture in my mind to see what you coming from...thanks

God will not grant you any sort of deliverance! Waiting for god is you not having the courage! (well, you wanted my opinion anyways)

I liked it, the silent watching phase gives me a good picture.

very good I liked it a lot. we are all silent watchers in the game we call life. *PurkeyGirl*

Excellent portrayal of the theme. Your mind seems mature than your age.

Interesting. it makes you wonder as to who you are talking about. only thing i suggest is rhyming sequence should maybe be slightly altered other then that very powerful and moving! good work!

Great Lines Loved the Last Lines the Most Silence is the Hardest Act to learn.... Being Silent Does not mean that we dont know about what is around us But it means..That what is Around us Does Not worth the Words

this is a space catching poem....beautifully written........

Angels are all ways watching until you ask for their help.'I send my angels to guide and protect you lest you stumble against a stone' paraphrased from one of the psalms.Good poem.